After filming our first draft of our film opening we became aware that we would need to re-draft a completely new storyboard for our final cut. There were many reasons that led to this decision.
1. Our first storyboard is shabby and messy. It is very difficult to work from and the shots that we want are not particularly clear.
2. From our draft there are sections that we will be cutting, for example the stairs and falling on to the bed. This is because the constant cuts in real life time became boring and monotonous and we do not want our final opening to be like this.
3. We were originally going to use a police car, however due to amount of daylight and availability this is not possible. To replace this we will only be using the sound of a police siren in combination with footage of our protagonist.
4. Our feedback showed that our target audience weren't very interested in our protagonist, to resolve this we have added her packing a bag. We hope that this will add further interest in to the background of her, and her motives.
